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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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MadamPoetry BRONZE said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 9:13 am
It's perfect, dude. I love how simple it is, but it gets the point across.
StarryRoss GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 4:57 pm
you're definitely right! Maybe not about everything you said, but guys, c'mon you can't be a real writer without getting some critique. Some skills and arts in life are like "If you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all!" Writing is not one of them. If all you want is undying praise and you're scared of critique, then please don't post your work to the public. Everyone is going to get critiqued in their lifetime, and it would behoove you to at least consider their remarks instead of chastise them. Really. We're not in kindergarten, people.
foreverlove GOLD said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 1:21 pm
haha i so get where your comming from. This is really good keep up the work.:)
disasterdominant13 SILVER said...
on Dec. 20 2011 at 8:17 am
*um, stanzas? ^^
Caroline Skjoedt BRONZE said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 8:23 pm
This is so good...so relatable.
introducingshelby GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 4:05 pm
Aw.. that's not nice..
introducingshelby GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 4:05 pm
Aw... be nice d:
fictitious-quandary GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 9:47 am
I am sorry to discredit you here and i am sure you are a smart girl but this made the magazine for a reason it is very good. Very simple but good. Don't be so critical without saying why it isn't good. What didn't you like about it?
Sharkbaitoohaha BRONZE said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 9:44 am
Hands and Strand do not rhyme. It was an okay poem, try to work on it.(needs some editing)
Strawberry5991 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2011 at 8:48 pm
Love it, its an awesome poem!!
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