Jerk | Teen Ink

Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 1558 comments.


on Aug. 30 2011 at 5:04 pm
emilybwrites SILVER, Villa Hills, Kentucky
5 articles 0 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
last night i lay in bed, looking up at the stars and i thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling?

wow love love LOVE! please check out my poem "Forgotten Domain" and "The Others" and comment/rate them thanks:)

on Aug. 30 2011 at 6:15 am
HeartMindSoul GOLD, Port Aransas, Texas
11 articles 53 photos 27 comments

In a way, this creeps me out, because it perfectly describes a previous situation I was in.

Like, can someone play the "Twilight Zone" theme for me here?


on Aug. 28 2011 at 1:20 pm
russianreader BRONZE, Charlotte, Vermont
2 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good, better, best. Never let it rest. Until your good is better and your better is best."

i totally know the feeling

on Aug. 28 2011 at 7:03 am
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant<br /> Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall<br /> Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Wow im pleasantly suprised. This was really good. You really described your feelings well. Good job. Hey can anybody read mine? Im just starting out and i need feedback.

Licia13 said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 9:24 am
Best poem ever!!!

on Aug. 24 2011 at 9:29 pm
introducingshelby GOLD, San Diego, California
15 articles 1 photo 139 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;People change so you can learn to let go, things go wrong so you can appreciate them when they go right, and things fall apart so better things can fall together.&quot;<br /> -Marilyn Monroe

A bit of a cliche; but it's nicely written :D

on Aug. 24 2011 at 11:56 am
just_me95 BRONZE, Crescent City California, California
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;dare i ask?... dare you assume?&quot;

I really liked it. I admit when i read the title i didnt think it would be very good. But i love how the words just came together. I especially love the precious jerk part. It adds more meaning. Good job!

-Duckie- GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 10:53 am
-Duckie- GOLD, West Fargo, North Dakota
18 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your heart is a weapon the size of your fist. Keep fighting. Keep loving.<br /> -Anonymous

Beautiful! I love it! Reminds me a lot of a jerk I know...

BeccaAnne said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 3:11 pm
BeccaAnne, Vanderbilt, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love me now, love me never. If you love me now, love me forever.&quot;

Love this!

Alise BRONZE said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 11:48 pm
Alise BRONZE, El Monte, California
1 article 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wisdom is knowing what to do next; Skill is knowing how to do it, and Virtue is doing it.

Ahh you wrote how I feel...

Good work:) I love love love it!<3

Beautiful. :)


on Aug. 22 2011 at 7:03 pm
Kayotic PLATINUM, Goodyear, Arizona
37 articles 9 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
You aren&#039;t having fun unless you&#039;re commiting sin~ Priest

Such great writing,so beautiful!The words just sing!Keep writing!

on Aug. 21 2011 at 2:52 pm
BeLoveToday PLATINUM, Manchester, New Hampshire
24 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
And as we let our own light shine, we unconsciously give other people permission to do the same. <br /> -Nelson Mandela<br /> <br /> &quot;Leave your fear of love behind, <br /> let your dreaming be your guide.<br /> If you seek, than you shall find.&quot;<br /> -&quot;Dreamer,&quot; by Elizaveta

I love this poem; it is so very relatable. It flows well, and the short, rhymed lines are perfectly structured. If you get a chance, I would appreciate some feedback on my poetry. Thanks for sharing!

on Aug. 19 2011 at 3:32 pm
Ladywarrior123 SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s like a novel. With the end ripped out. The edge of a canon. With only one way down.&quot;<br /> -Rascal Flatts (Stand)

This really is amazing. I love it. Your an awesome writer. keep it up!!!

Mary2016 said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 12:43 pm
this is so amazing!!!!!

SweetLove3 said...
on Aug. 13 2011 at 6:15 pm
SweetLove3, Scranton, Arkansas
0 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never regret anything that ever made you smile!

OMG! This is rlly good!

on Aug. 9 2011 at 12:59 pm
katherinetwizzee BRONZE, New York, New York
3 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have a boyfriend. I have a dog.

your poetry is awesome. <3

 


on Aug. 9 2011 at 12:58 pm
katherinetwizzee BRONZE, New York, New York
3 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have a boyfriend. I have a dog.

Does anyone know what love is like? <3
awesome poem btw

ama1013 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 9 2011 at 12:56 am
ama1013 BRONZE, Fairfield, Connecticut
1 article 0 photos 25 comments
love this poem! nice job keep on writing :D ♥

annie.j02 GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 6:33 pm
annie.j02 GOLD, Elverson, Pennsylvania
12 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Imagination is the beginning of creation. You imagine what you desire, you will what you imagine, and at last, you create what you will&rdquo; &ndash; George Bernard Shaw

Love this it makes me wanna be in LOVE

Amant SILVER said...
on Aug. 8 2011 at 2:20 pm
Amant SILVER, Llano, California
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
**All the world\\\&#039;s a stage, and all the men and women merely players: they have their exits and their entrances; and one man in his time plays many parts, his acts being seven ages.**

I Love This Poem!! ♥