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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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chloechloechloe said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:25 am
Just kidding I absolutley LOVE this story :)
leah said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:25 am
I loved this story! its just amazing very good. What great writer!
:D
DyLaN lAmPoS said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:24 am
I <3 Leah!
chloechloechloe said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:23 am
Awful story. it needs alot of work, i hated it.
- Chloe Welsh
- Chloe Welsh
chloechloechloe said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:22 am
good story. sorta.
chloe said...
on May. 12 2011 at 8:11 am
Chicken Noddle soup.
genesis c said...
on May. 11 2011 at 8:57 pm
i really love this! i
NothingSpecial BRONZE said...
on May. 11 2011 at 5:32 pm
I love this poem so much!!! In a way it kinda makes me laugh inside! But i love it!!!
katibug919 BRONZE said...
on May. 9 2011 at 2:07 pm
This is about the most amazing poem ive read on here so far! I can completly relate....Guys are jerks in SOOO many ways and yet....You still fall in love. I love it!! and if you would, check out my poems. I have one on here similar...
CrystalMarie GOLD said...
on May. 9 2011 at 9:44 am
This is really good!
__horizon133 PLATINUM said...
on May. 6 2011 at 1:41 pm
very, very good, and well writen. but don't take my word for it--you're in the magazine! check out my poems sometime, too.
Cortaysiaaaa. ;) said...
on May. 5 2011 at 2:13 pm
Ayeee, this was really good. I read this aloud to my class right? And they loved it. Good Job! Seriously, write more. Buhhh Byee. I love you<3 We should sooo chill sometime.
Daniosopuppy BRONZE said...
on May. 5 2011 at 2:11 pm
I am in love with your poem no joke! I show it to like everyone! It completely describes this guy that i know(; ahhh<3 legit this is Perfect<3
SavvyCake1 SILVER said...
on May. 2 2011 at 3:40 pm
i like it. i think its great.
PrettyLittleDarling SILVER said...
on May. 1 2011 at 12:55 pm
this is the perfect poem for me your writting just spoke everythink my heart is saying :) amazing
FacebookAddict11 said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:17 pm
I love this one, good use of rhymes by the way, Keep up the good work
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Favorite Quote:
Ah, I'm one of those weird people who goes through their note books just to read the quotes, so finding a fav is hard for me... 'There is no pleasure in having nothing to do; the fun is in having lots to do and not doing it' - Mary Little ;)
She does like him, but just because she likes him doesn't mean he's not being a jerk. Try rereading the poem and paying attention to all the words, try to feel what kind of emotions would lead you to say those exact words.
Anyway, great job, this peice actually digs quite deep into the complications of love. Congrats on getting into the magazine :)