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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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Lonleydandy said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 8:42 pm
Normally I don't comment on things with as many comments as you have [just to spread the love around] but I had to comment on this....It put my life into five stanzas..I love it.
Actresspoet123 said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 2:15 pm
Wow, I'm very familiar with this! this realates to alot of people, i love this poem!
SassyBeauty BRONZE said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 1:55 pm
omgg!
i didnt know how to put the way I felt about my ex but now I do! iLoveit!
i didnt know how to put the way I felt about my ex but now I do! iLoveit!
♫My_Shooting_Star♫ BRONZE said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 11:58 am
this is great
meaghan demallie SILVER said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 9:31 pm
and although hes a jerk, you can't stop loving him, can't stop having feelings for him. You want to slap him, to kick him, to key his car, you want him to say baby, i love you
story of my life.
we all want what we can't have
i know this feeling, and im pretty sure so does everyone else...
i want him.
Great poem! really relatable!
story of my life.
we all want what we can't have
i know this feeling, and im pretty sure so does everyone else...
i want him.
Great poem! really relatable!
Mylifeforpoetry BRONZE said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 11:24 pm
OMG, this describes my crush exactly!
NASHAYLA:) GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 8:33 am
THiS iS REALLY q00D:)
rain-rain111 PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 8:18 pm
This was great!!! when it was printed in the magazine and I first read this I understood what you ment thats a sign of an amzing poem! Keep up the writing.
emilypeacewriter11 said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 7:37 pm
wow, so good so true about guys that are jerks, but yet they aren't jerks. I can totally relate to this poem
sarahxinsane921 SILVER said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 5:21 pm
This Is An Ahmazing Piece Of Work, And A Wonderful Display Of Emotion.
Keep Writing :)
Keep Writing :)
doverdrama said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 4:11 pm
i love this so ,much! this perfectly describes howi feel about a guy! i hope you keep writing, youre really good!
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 3:57 pm
omg i love this! i think the poem is great, the rhythm the rhyming.... love it! and good job getting it published!!! u have real talent!
check out my stuff and comment so i can improve, too!
check out my stuff and comment so i can improve, too!
beautifulpeople SILVER said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 3:03 pm
ohmyygolly! that describes this one guy that sits in front of mee in science!!! except he has dirtyy blond hair and he doesn't really notice mee! haha but hunn youu have an AMAZINGG poem:) most girls will fall in love with this
To love and be loved said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 2:11 pm
OMG i love it it just really describes my life right now and i really hope ur going to keep up the reat work. its really cool to know that there are other people going through the same things as u even though that a not good things most of the time.
MissyxJoker SILVER said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 12:07 pm
I love this poem cause it's so true! There's always that one guy that you end up having the bigest crush on. When you know you shouldn't, cause he's a jerk but you just can't help it...
