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I hate splash water on the lack of there-forth

June 2, 2009
By Anonymous

honestly,
i feel like im losing you
i feel like im not good enough, no matter what you say
honestly,
thats why im clinging so hard.

honestly,
i dont care
your a selfish and only love yourself
honestly.

honestly,
i dont understand it either
i dont know whats so wrong
it hurts, a lot
and i have scars
and im just setting myself up for therapy.

honestly,
i feel like im copying you
like everyone thinks im a fake, a fraud
but im not, this is what makes me feel alive
at least, i think.

honestly,
i hate god
i hate liars, and i hate gray areas
it conflicts, and doesnt make sense
and theres no proof
so i just cant.

honestly,
i feel pity for people who are religious because they must be either
ignorant, or desperate for love
like me,
honestly.

honestly,
i doubt love is real.
its all fake, and just a game we play
so we feel like were worth something

and honestly,

i h a t e h o n e s t y .

it heavies your heart

and makes you jump out of delusional fraud

and splash water on the lack of there-forth

© Anonymous

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I feel this, I completely understand where you’re coming from and I’d love to read more of your work. I feel stuck in confusion and conflict in my own mind similar to this and it feels good to know I’m not the only one.
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Trying hard to refrain from criticism.
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@connielee10809 it may not make sense to you because you cannot relate to their experience, and you can't tell me you've never made a spelling mistake- this is a very positive community so maybe try constructive criticism instead of using negativity!
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@connielee10809 no need for the non positive comment we all make mistakes
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This is a beautiful insight into the soul. Thank you for your vulnerability and your pain, you are not alone in your thoughts and not wrong in your analyses of them. To search for God IS for those who are desperate for love- not desperate for just any kind of love, but for the all-understanding, perfect love that only He can give.
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"your a selfish and only love yourself"
YOU'RE.
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honestly, this doesn't make sense :D
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Incredible. Really love the torn-between ness of it.
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Beautifully written! Keep writing :)
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I like this except I'm religious and I'm not ignorant or desperate for love. Putting that aside, you did a good job with the format.
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This is soo good I love it keep making more
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"Honestly, I hate honesty." Beautiful. You can truly see the inner-conflict playing with every line. Well done!
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This could be a song
Madisonm2 BRONZE said...
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BUT WHAT DOES THIS MEAN