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The Good in Your Evils

September 29, 2023
By Anonymous


In stories where evils dawn 

upon innocent princesses,


where motherly sins and

fairy godmothers come 


together like swords and 

shields, it is black and white. 


Characters are confined

to labels of good and bad,


unknowingly weighed down

by the judgemental eyes 


of storytelling mothers

and their young.


Rapunzel. Her sunrise  

hair and infectious heart 


of gold won the readers, 

making her the friend, while 


her witch of a mother, 

a foe. Stained in her 


own blood of sins, Mother

Gothel succumbed to 


the might of this 

inevitable fate. 


Cinderella, who was 

blessed with the looks 


of an angel, served as a 

maid under our pitying 


eyes. While step sisters

that made demands 


like undying alarms, each 

longing for the prince’s love, 


lay victim to the biased 

nature of grimm’s creations. 


But when evil turns good,

who do you choose to love?


Or perhaps they were good 

to begin with.


Good even after that one 

night, when you left the


front door ajar leaving 

just your knocked heels


and the scent of lingering 

rum. It led me to your room, 


where your stiff satin dress 

sags lazily beside your 


bed — a corpse of the day’s

endless phone calls and 


yells from your tyrannical

boss. Beside this rotting 


grave, lay a flowerbed of 

crumpled tissues and 


scattered papers. 

When I entered your 


cage of steel that night, 

you welcomed me 


with your hugs and kisses. 

Your touches travel like 


bramble, bleeding puddles

of stinging greens and 


palm shaped rouge 

across my body.  


The melodic tune 

of your amplified words 


reminded me of the mother 

you used to be to me. 


When your luminescence 

burned in the dead of night, 


and when your touches 

felt like blankets of warmth. 


How I yearned for the days

when love did not come at 


the expense of security. 

When love wasn’t a transaction. 


But even when you’ve left me 

with your lithified comments


and your caustic caresses, 

my ambivalence to you 


makes me yearn for the

good I see in your malice. 


The author's comments:

The Good In Your Evils expands on the complexity of parent-child relationships. It explores the complexity behind the ambivalence of loving someone even though they have previously hurt you in any way. I was particularly inspired by the syntax of Goblin by Matthew Dickman and how he alluded to fairytales in his story. 


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