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the last i saw him
i was still a young child
still trying to learn about my life
still trying to expirence new expirences
I still remeber him in the back of a police car
not knowing what was going to happen
i was on my knees begging and crying to give my dad one last hug
i knew i was not going to be able to see him ever again
the officer did not let me
i was crying and begging please please please
yet nomatter what i said they still would not let me
i was not able to sleep that niqht
those memrmoire still replay in my head like a movie
every moment ,second, move and word that was made
theirs a play and rewind button
but theirs not a fastforward one
i wanna get away from that memory
i dont want to remeber that day anymore
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