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I Never Really Thought About It Until Now MAG

April 1, 2009
By Anonymous

On the third day of your absence
my lips were chapped and I was looking for Cherry Blistex
in the depths of my brown corduroys.
And Honora told me where you are
And trees bent over
And we gathered around the window in the History room.
A shiver snaked through my body.
I wished I was lying under the hollow thunder
I wished you were in my arms
And I sat at my desk with my knees in my neck
and you came to me in a raindrop, on the wind,
in a thought.
We were together again
and I was nursing your wounds.
I think I'll go to your house today
and take a sledgehammer
to your bathtub.



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on Feb. 13 2013 at 11:18 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

It's good though!

on Feb. 13 2013 at 11:18 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;If you&#039;re losing your soul and you know it, then you&#039;ve still got a soul left to lose&rdquo; <br /> ― Charles Bukowski

I feel like I'm the only one who doesn't get this..... :(

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on Feb. 13 2013 at 7:35 pm
twitte14 GOLD, University Park, Maryland
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This is amazing! I can definitely see why it's in the magazine. Congrats! Keep writing :)

on Nov. 20 2011 at 8:40 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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plz, check out my work. nice poem

on Jul. 11 2011 at 10:59 am
maggiebar1 GOLD, Valparaiso, Indiana
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Wow! I really liked this it's beautifully written... Mind checking out some of my stuff?:)

on Nov. 11 2009 at 3:06 pm
Kaylynn_Loveless BRONZE, Russellville, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;An artist is somebody who produces things that people don&#039;t need to have.&quot;- Andy Warhol<br /> <br /> &quot;Don&#039;t pay any attention to what they write about you. Just measure it in inches.&quot;- Andy Warhol

Nicely writen.

I enjoy the concept, but I believe it is better than other peoms just because it doesn't flat out state what is going on until the end, and even when you do explain, it's writen in a way to make you think.