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Now your gone

December 4, 2013
By CarlyGrealish BRONZE, Bourne, Massachusetts
CarlyGrealish BRONZE, Bourne, Massachusetts
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You said you liked me
Was that a lie
Who is she
Now this is good bye

You said you would stay
But now your gone
Now you got your way
You let me fall hard

What about us
Now your gone
What about the trust
You were a mistake

We were ment to be
We are still friends
You were everything to me
You ment so much

You said you liked me
Was that a lie
Who is she
Now this is good bye

Now your gone gone gone
And I am done
So what about us
And now your gone gone gone



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PiperBloo GOLD said...
on Dec. 7 2013 at 5:52 pm
PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;there are 2 types of writer&#039;s: one that makes you think and one that makes you wonder&quot;Brian Aldiss<br /> &quot;Some things i cannot change but til i try i&#039;ll never know&quot; Wicked the musical

really really love this piece! Absolutly beautiful! my only comment is that the ryhme scheme, while very interesting and clearly thought-out, is a little comlicated and confusing and can distract from the piece. Try to avoid that in the future. Overall i loved it! Keep writing!