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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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GotSoccer19 said...
on May. 6 2012 at 3:55 pm
That. Was. So. Amazingly. Good. I can totally relate to that.
chips said...
on May. 3 2012 at 2:31 pm
I enjoyed the oxymoron about the jerk being special. I also liked the metaphor you used when you were talking about his cocky smirk. great job
airjohnnys said...
on May. 3 2012 at 12:56 pm
I like how the person you're talking about is a likeable jerk and you're using metaphors and oxymorons
rebeckabear BRONZE said...
on May. 3 2012 at 12:20 pm
this writing is very cool i wish i had a jerk in my life that i like write on. you know whats right, sit down and write
Ariberry13 SILVER said...
on May. 2 2012 at 5:30 pm
love it .. i hate when that happens
KaraleeB said...
on May. 2 2012 at 7:51 am
great! You showed that there was love, and there was hate and it was plain to see using oxymorons. It also had a great use of metaphor like when you expalined his hair, it illustrated an image.
Jordan T. D. said...
on May. 1 2012 at 2:12 pm
Great job, I love the oxymoron that you used with the precious jerk. It was amazing altogether but I also liked the hair metaphor. Great job again, and keep writing.
Tanner B said...
on May. 1 2012 at 8:12 am
Good job! I liked the oxymoron about the jerk being precious. I also liked the metaphor you used when you were talking about his hair.
KaraleeB said...
on May. 1 2012 at 8:07 am
This poem had nice rythem and the verses flowed together to create an impressive stanza.
Haim :P said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 10:34 am
This poem has a very good sense of rhythmic structure and I like how there are some oxymorons. People can relate to the poem and it is very well written. It was clear how the writer was involved with the person the poem was talking about.
CamCam<3 said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 10:33 am
This was very well written! You used great figurative language. I really liked the assonance. It made the piece so much more interesting! Another thing I really liked was how you used metaphors and idioms to compare this "jerk" to what you are feeling. Keep writing!!! You are an AWESOME writer
jazzyy33456 said...
on Apr. 23 2012 at 9:15 am
i like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3
Nisha007 said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 3:22 pm
I really like this poem I has great stanzas and meaning. ROCK ON!!!!!!!
TheMouseWins BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2012 at 5:12 pm
I adore this. I like how the narrator is so wrapped up in this person, and yet she says he's a jerk all the same (I can relate...)
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