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January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.

© Colton D., Lubbock, TX

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Bluetooth13 SILVER said...
on Apr. 12 2013 at 2:28 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
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To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.<br /> <br /> ~ Ludwig van Beethoven

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Hey im pretty new, please check out my work. Thanks  
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on Mar. 27 2013 at 1:51 pm
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From the ashes a fire shall be woken,<br /> A light from the shadows shall spring;<br /> Renewed shall be blade that was broken,<br /> The crownless again shall be king.&rdquo; <br /> ― J.R.R. Tolkien, The Fellowship of the Ring

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this was rly good i made my ex shane read it
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on Mar. 25 2013 at 1:30 pm
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I am in love with this poem and can relate. You are an amazing writer!!! Keep writing!!!! If you get the chance could you please look at my poems and tell me how I could make them better. I understand if you don't have time. Thank you.
GinryuStargazer BRONZE said...
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I cannot relate to this. I have a lot of 'jerks' as friends, but that's usually because they are intriguing--most unconventional people tend to be. Guy and girl jerks, the lot of them. This is my warning; the flow and rythmn was good. Some more vibrant word choice--ones that are dripping in anger and others in admiration--could very well portray the frustration you want to express.
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truth be told i know that same feeling
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This piece like put tears in my eyes. It describes so much of my life! Haha! FIVE STARS!
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on Feb. 27 2013 at 7:20 pm
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And this everybody is my life! haha thank you for writting this... its great (:
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I think every single girl can relate to this. So good!
Bluetooth13 SILVER said...
on Feb. 17 2013 at 8:58 pm
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Wow! :) Amazing
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on Feb. 16 2013 at 10:36 pm
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I can't believe how much I can relate to this! This is really great:)
forever1218 said...
on Feb. 7 2013 at 7:31 pm
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Love this piece, it perfectly describes that even though you know someone is an absolute jerk, you still cant help but want him. When you step back and think about it it's really extremly silly but all us girls find ourselves doing it and no one knows why
little boy said...
on Feb. 6 2013 at 2:59 pm
why did you name it jerk
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on Feb. 1 2013 at 11:32 am
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I really like this poem I find myself cominng back to read it all the time.  
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on Jan. 30 2013 at 2:49 pm
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I like the poem. It describes my friend alot. i will make sure he comes and read this poem.
KaitlynMarie24 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2013 at 2:13 pm
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This is an amazing piece of poetry please check my poem out, and tell me what you think
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on Jan. 29 2013 at 1:47 am
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amazing work -simple yet relatable! Keep writing~
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Absolutely AMAZING!!!!!!!
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This was fantastic!!!! And please read, rate, and comment on some of my stories. It means a lot to me :)
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I adore this. I really do. I feel as though these were the words I had been so desperate to set to paper when I had been experiencing this.
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It's really great... good job!!!