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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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WindDancer GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2011 at 6:58 am
Great job! Very relatable. Keep writing. :)
musiqqlvr31 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 22 2011 at 3:24 am
me too...though i dont like love him or anything
the_sparrow SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 8:50 pm
You make me glad I signed up on this site :)
greenday21luvsbilliejoe said...
on Jan. 20 2011 at 1:27 pm
i know a guy just like this
Annab said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 11:24 am
I like this a lot! very well done! :)
WerewolfWriting BRONZE said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 8:09 pm
The love that shines in this poem really touches the reader. Great work!
Alasia said...
on Jan. 15 2011 at 10:54 am
great bravo!
theinbetween said...
on Jan. 14 2011 at 4:05 pm
he can't get you back whenever he wants if you don't let him... don't go there anymore. My advice is to focus on yourself and go back to how you use to go about your day before he came along. You don't deserve to be hurt.
sunnyhunny PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 8:20 pm
Wow wow wow. Love this. Amazing.
ashley123456 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 8:52 am
I love this poem, for many reasons of course, but mostly it because i can relate to it.
Jones said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 5:03 pm
This poem can be true with some guys. I know some girls that talk like this about some guys, but it usually turns out alright. When I started to read this poem, I thought the poem was going to be about how nice the boy is. After I read this poem, I knew the writer was not talking good about the boy. The writer was talking bad about the boy.
misswindsor BRONZE said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 11:00 pm
This poem is exactly how I feel right now about this guy. I LOVE this poem, it's my favorite poem!!!!
BriannaMendoza BRONZE said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 7:11 pm
I thought it was very good! I loved it!
BeYOUtiful_13 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 4 2011 at 2:42 pm
I truely love. I think it beats most of the poems i read. Nice job
iwantyou</3 said...
on Jan. 2 2011 at 10:38 pm
THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEEL /: IM STILL IN LOVE WITH HIM AFTER 6 MONTHS OF BEING HURT. IM NOTHING WITHOUT HIM. HE HURT ME SO BAD YET HE CAN STILL GET ME BACK WHENEVER HE WANTS :(
WhiteClouds said...
on Dec. 31 2010 at 4:13 pm
I love how the words in the first to sentences draw you in. It's good and descriptive...
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