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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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Love_is_Endless said...
on Nov. 21 2010 at 9:53 am
I love this poem! It's so beautiful! Your my favorite Author yet on Teenink! Keep it up! I would love to hear more!
SideraCaeli GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2010 at 9:52 pm
Really good! Very to the point with a little bit of comedy! Overall, one of the best sonnets I've read so far.
watching_light BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 10:16 pm
I really loved your poem! your rythm was really balanced and enjoyable to read :D
KenzieBettsy BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 6:17 pm
I can totally relate, this poem just put into words exactly what I've been thinking in my head
CanNeverHoldMeBack GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2010 at 11:20 am
good choices! bittersweet goodness!
silentvocal SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2010 at 9:32 pm
I always love when i see a poem speak purely from mindflow-it doesn't even matter what its about if it's "real"-i dont mean real as in fiction nonfiction but real like truly from you (the author) :) keep it up dude :P
MisteriousAngel BRONZE said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 10:18 pm
this is such a good poem. i think everyone can relate to it. i love it. cant wait to read your other ones ;P
singergurl12 GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2010 at 5:30 pm
LOL SOO TRU i love this
we_are_sunscientists said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 6:10 pm
People who read twilight? Stop. It's tainting your writing.
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 10:14 am
Wow, do you people do that just for fun? I've had fake users comment on my stuff before, and I just laugh at your immaturity. But I'm curious, do you look for a certain poem to comment on, or is your retared little comment thing just on random poems?
And BTW, This is such a great poem i loved it! :)
gozochrissie said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:09 am
wow that was very interesting and yea we all love a precious jerk at one time...lol
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