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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Aug. 10 2010 at 11:04 pm
madilyne BRONZE, Lancaster, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
being diffrent is one of the best things i have ever done with my life

this really made me cry, i love it

on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:24 pm
splinterstar BRONZE, Arcadia, California
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This poem is such whimsical romantic genius. Sort of like those cute innocent poems we read in elementary, but with a reality twist. Keep writing!!

on Aug. 9 2010 at 7:11 pm
Annabelle294 SILVER, Branford, Connecticut
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I love this, it has a nice flow

on Aug. 9 2010 at 3:32 pm
This poem is amazing. Keep on writing! (:

on Aug. 9 2010 at 7:46 am
tianaxbiddy SILVER, Wareham, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Plot is character revealed by action.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -Aristotle

i really love this poem i have had and sorta still have someone like this but not really

on Aug. 4 2010 at 11:28 am
i feel the same way that exact thing happened to me and if u look at my profile picture it will be the one who done it to me  but over all i realy loved ur poem there so many things that happpen like that now these days

on Aug. 2 2010 at 5:17 pm
Sammmmmmmm GOLD, Jefferson, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Strength is hard to get, and easy to use<br /> Don&#039;t leave the ones you love for the ones you like ; they, too, will leave you for the ones they love

i feel the complete same.!

on Aug. 2 2010 at 8:19 am
KelseyForLife SILVER, Moline, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Live Life to the fullest. &lt;33

This is great. i love how it had some rhyme words in it. great job

on Aug. 1 2010 at 10:07 pm
loveibanez BRONZE, Maumee, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When you get to the end of your rope, tie a knot and hang on!&quot; -Ben Franklin

I just had to comment on this one. It is perfectly stated, simple, and I love it. I know you have gotten a million comments, but I just wanted to say nice job, and I know how you feel!

hepburn said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 5:16 am
hepburn, Assd, Other
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sdf

this is a very nice way to describe what most of us feel :) good job!

on Jul. 30 2010 at 10:47 pm
nikka12345678999 BRONZE, New Orleans, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
hold fast to dreams for if dreams die life is a broken wing bird that cannot fly

this is sooo awsome...wow it relates to mainly every girl

on Jul. 30 2010 at 10:24 pm
chocolatkiss1013 SILVER, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
But paradise is locked and bolted, we must make a journey around the world to see if a backdoor has perhaps been left open

i love how its sad but still makes you want to smile 

on Jul. 30 2010 at 9:00 pm
deus-ex-machina14 BRONZE, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;There are two main tragedies in life. One is not getting what one wants, and the other is getting it.&quot; -Oscar Wilde

This is a collage of kind of sad, cute, funny, and sweet all at once. Very unique and something that makes you smile:) good job!

on Jul. 30 2010 at 8:19 pm
Annika-Katryn SILVER, Fredericksburg, Virginia
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&quot;Thou art my life, my love, my heart, <br /> The very eyes of me: <br /> And hast command of every part <br /> To live and die for thee.&quot;<br /> -Robert Herrick

it makes me laugh, in an semi-sad way. thank you.

on Jul. 30 2010 at 7:10 pm
emmacxoxo PLATINUM, Chelsea, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Okay. Okay.

this was absolutely amazinggg...it had alot of emotion

on Jul. 30 2010 at 6:37 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

This is great I really like it Your very talented.

on Jul. 30 2010 at 6:05 pm
silence-is-loud GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY, STING LIKE A BEE- MUHAMMID ALI

I looovveeedd this poem. nice way with words btw

on Jul. 30 2010 at 11:43 am
beautifuldisaster18, Arlington, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Keep your feet on the ground, When your head&#039;s in the clouds.

I love this! It flows really well. And it's funny. :)

It makes me want to read more of your writing...If there is more. haha


on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:44 pm
WaterWatcher SILVER, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Good things don&#039;t just happen to those that wait but to those that do.

i luv the oxymoron way good

anon said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:56 am
I liked it. It's good, but I mostly liked it because I can really really relate to it.