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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
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I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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on Jul. 8 2010 at 1:06 pm
cinderella PLATINUM, BEVERLY HIILLS, California
38 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is a book, you can write or read, but what ever you do keep flipping the pages

 really like this...it describes the kinda guys that i like...ur attracted to them but they are not good for you...bad boys i call em! very well done i love this:)

Beazzzz BRONZE said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 10:52 am
Beazzzz BRONZE, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
These violent delights have violent ends <br /> And in their triumph die, like fire and powder,<br /> Which, as they kiss, consume.<br /> -Romeo and Juliet, Act II, Scene VI

This piece is very well written. It brings tears to my eyes! Very Well done.

sabortooth1 said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 10:27 am
sabortooth1, Logan, Utah
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Please read the book review of The Kite Runner.  Just search "The Kite Runner" and it is about the third green highlighted one.  Very Inspiring! Rate/Comment it

on Jul. 6 2010 at 11:06 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I realize that life is risks. It&#039;s acknowledging the past but looking forward. It&#039;s taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven.&quot; <br /> -The Dead Tossed Waves.

i like this. it has a simplicity too it but meaning and truth. good job.

on Jul. 2 2010 at 3:12 pm
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
34 articles 1 photo 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth

wow love this reemids me of my own past life you todly rock

on Jun. 30 2010 at 11:51 am
peacelovepoetry, Florissant, Missouri
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i really like how the lines are short...it makes it more catchy :) good job!

on Jun. 28 2010 at 6:05 pm
SarahJumps SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Great minds discuss ideas; average minds discuss events; small minds discuss people. <br /> -Eleanor Roosevelt<br /> <br /> I think, at a child&#039;s birth, if a mother could ask a fairy godmother to endow it with the most useful gift, that gift should be curiosity. -E.R

really love this

supatwinn014 said...
on Jun. 24 2010 at 10:31 pm
supatwinn014, Upper Marlboro, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;to typical to say I LOVE U but its different when your IN LOVE.&quot;

this was tight i loved it ....so much

 


on Jun. 24 2010 at 1:31 pm
ladykate100 SILVER, Nunda, New York
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cool everthing is there

on Jun. 23 2010 at 6:34 pm
Shorty26088 BRONZE, Grand Ledge, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
I want to know that one day when I walk out of here that I changed someones life - By Stasia

I love this poem everything decribed for one word brvo

MeganM BRONZE said...
on Jun. 22 2010 at 2:20 pm
MeganM BRONZE, Sandy, Utah
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wow! i love this. it's so out of the ordinary and unique. good work(:

M2M4life:) said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 8:33 pm

wow crazy to come accross this one cuz i hav this problem right now lol stupid precious jerks..

 


on Jun. 19 2010 at 10:12 pm
Thornedheart GOLD, Manvel, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
What if im not the hero... What if im the bad guy?

Impressive and totally true so many jerk around yet they still make our heart pound!

DannieGirll said...
on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:36 pm
Dude ur so good! i loved that. its so sad and deep. keep writting!

on Jun. 18 2010 at 10:48 am
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] &hearts;

That was so good ! Amazing writer ! Don't ever stop :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u ♥


on Jun. 16 2010 at 6:43 pm
SarahReeder PLATINUM, Waynesville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;If God is all you have, then you have all you need.&quot;<br /> &quot;You don&#039;t need water to feel like you&#039;re drowning.&quot;<br /> &quot;Whats meant to be will always find its way.&quot;

i totally know whatcha mean with this poem(: very well written!

waffjay said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 5:53 pm
waffjay, Irvine, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I worked my using hard, so now I want to work my sobriety hard.&quot;

reminds me of my ex boyfriend. he was the jerk of all jerks. abused me in any way he possibly could. every single way. i like your line about his love killing the things you hold close to you. he's so irresistible, but we don't know why. how can this be when he treats me this way? thank god i am out of that relationship. thank god i made it out alive. this is an extreme case, but girls, just stay away from jerks anyways, you never know how they can turn out to be. i never want to see someone getting hurt like i was. walk away from him.  please

figureitout said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 4:22 pm
figureitout, Dorchester, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Life is too short to wake up with regrets.So love the people who treat you right, forget the ones that dont.Nobody said life would be easy, they just promised it&#039;d be worth it.

i like it. i guess im not the only girl whose fallen for the jerk.? i dont knoww, there's just something about them that makes them irresistable.

Jessens SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2010 at 3:04 pm
Jessens SILVER, Keosauqua, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
The saying forgive and forget is only partially correct. Yes, you can forgive, but you can never forget..<br /> -------------<br /> &quot;Nut Ug!&quot; -Felix<br /> &quot;What the heck is Nut Ug!&quot; -Me<br /> &quot;I have no idea, but it&#039;s hilarious!&quot; -Felix <br /> Both of us laughing soo hard!

Very Good Job! It was well written! (:

on Jun. 16 2010 at 2:51 pm

yeah,y???????????????? lol!!!!!!!

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