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Daddy's Womb MAG
April 23, 2008
i asked my father if i could swim,
and he said that i would drown.
The Sea would imprison me – he said
if my feet had left the ground.
So i walked out to the water,
and cried out – how ’bout now!
He said, a little bit further, Son,
and then you’ll leave the ground.
i stepped on sand then stone,
from hollow ground to sturdy.
The sky was at my level as I
gazed at the birdie.
The Sea brought me a new idea,
the urge to flee to the high.
i asked my Father if i could fly,
and he said, sure, Son – go try.
i jumped as high as i could.
Still, i landed on the ground.
i saw my Father pull on a chain,
then i knew that i was bound.
© Anonymous
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caroleeena BRONZE said...
on Dec. 6 2016 at 3:21 pm
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on Nov. 1 2016 at 11:06 am
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on Oct. 30 2016 at 11:12 am
I love the message of this poem !
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on Oct. 17 2016 at 8:40 am
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Thetruthbehindme21 SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2016 at 2:44 pm
thats very good i like things like that i have a bunch of poems with my mom that i should post that are close to this.
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on Sep. 15 2016 at 6:13 pm
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on Sep. 15 2016 at 10:56 am
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on Jul. 12 2016 at 12:11 pm
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on Jun. 19 2016 at 10:50 am
This poem is so meaningful. It is a beautiful piece! Please keep writing!!
just-a-little-human BRONZE said...
on Jun. 12 2016 at 5:22 pm
Such a good poem. I love the rhymes, you've seriously got some talent.
dont.cry.little.girl. SILVER said...
on May. 21 2016 at 2:55 pm
Though I love my dad and have a great relationship with him, I appreciate this piece because I think it captures the power of this sort of relationship-even the bad ones.
Experiences_happen BRONZE said...
on May. 9 2016 at 2:48 pm
fahters arent worth any persons time. At least mine doesnt deserve My time
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