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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.

© Adam B., Highland Village, TX

The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.
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on Aug. 18 2012 at 1:48 pm
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Dude, I got chills reading this. Beautiful and powerful, I loved it!
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i tottaly get what ur saying in here
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i tottaly get what ur saying in here
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This is really awesome...i would want to hear this song.
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i don't know why but i realy liked the poem-song "Bleed" i'm into stuff like that. there aren't that many song lyrics that i like but i liked that one. AWESOME WORD PLAY!
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on Feb. 16 2012 at 3:05 pm
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OMG!!! i love it i would listen to this all the time everyday and never get tired of it :)
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I would buy this for my iPod and listen to it repeatedly until my eardrums died. I don't want to do that with many songs. I REALLY want to that with this song
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AHHHHHHHHHHHH! WOW! ALL I CAN SAY IS.. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
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wow you'll go far!
Schuyler BRONZE said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 12:53 pm
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I love your song am going to play this song on my guitar .
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this is amazing i really like it. keep writing =)
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i think i'll post this to youtube give u credit because this is outstanding 
AliceVanityHarragarra said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:54 pm
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WHY ARE YOU SAYING BLEEEEEEED IT SOUNDS TO ME YOU GUYS ARE CRITISIZING HER POEM CUT IT OUT I DONT THINK YOU WOULD LIKE IT  IF SOME1 SAID THAT ABOUT YOU WOULD YOU I DONT THINK SO!!!!!!!!!!!!
AliceVanityHarragarra said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:50 pm
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I THINK KASSY ELIZABETH IS RIGHT  HEARTBROKEN 101 THERE HAS TO BE A POINT PEOPLE JUST CANT EXPRESS THEIRSELVES WITH OUT HAVING A POINT DUH BESIDES ITS HER SONG !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
AliceVanityHarragarra said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:45 pm
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THATS TRUE I MEAN FOR A GIRL LIKE ME TOTALLY TRUE BUT I HAVE TO ADMIT IT WAS THE BEST
AliceVanityHarragarra said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:41 pm
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WHAT IS COLDPLAY AND HAWTHORNE I WANT TO KNW ARE THEY SOME KIND OF HEAVY METAL BAND
AliceVanityHarragarra said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:38 pm
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i dont get the both of you guys coldplay and hawthorne are they like heavy metal bands or something:)
Alwayslonesome said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:31 pm
Wow these lyrics are Breath taking and to me its just sad but astonishing :)) keep writing
smurfett said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:22 am
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thats not weird to say no not at all
smurfett said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 9:21 am
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thats not weird at all