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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.

© Adam B., Highland Village, TX

The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.
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criminalninja<33 SILVER said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 7:21 pm
criminalninja<33 SILVER, Hidalgo, Texas
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bambambam

what's that?

excellency :)

yorf said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:28 pm
actually. don't BLEEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yourself.
yorf said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:22 pm
BLEEEEEDDDDD!!!!!!!! yourself
yorf said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:10 pm
BLEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yalith BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 8:39 am
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i love this song. i was wondering if i could print it out and give it a tune.
emo_nerd951 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 10:46 pm
emo_nerd951 BRONZE, Clover, South Carolina
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This is really good!!! Like no joke. I am like dead serious. Keep up the good work!!!
curlikap18 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 11:01 am
curlikap18 BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
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really love it! I want to hear it. so when its on youtube....
Alexandria6 BRONZE said...
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This is the best song i've ever read on here. I absolutely love it! And the best part is being able to relate to it.
VampChick49 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 1:13 pm
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OMG thiz wuz one of the most emoest lovelyest things i have ever read i am so verry inspired i luv it
TNT25 SILVER said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 11:47 am
TNT25 SILVER, Johnstown, Ohio
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Very well written. The emotion is well displayed and dang its just a good song.
laaeira BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 7:34 pm
laaeira BRONZE, Kilgore, Texas
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I felt the song so well it was wonderful good job :)
Meli138 said...
on Feb. 6 2010 at 11:09 pm
Meli138, GP, Texas
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Hey this was really good! It kinda reminded me (just a bit) of the song Watch Me Bleed by Scary Kids Scaring Kids and Give Me A Sign by Breaking Benjamin. Good Job! :D Youve got talent!
DallysGrrl PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 6 2010 at 11:14 am
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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WOW. I really could feel the, well, feeling in this song. I don't know what those other people were talking about, because the passion and the raw truth here is inspiring and really great. I really did like it. It's #1 hit material!
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 12:14 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Thank you so much. Much better comment then the two people before you! =]
xXWOLFXx SILVER said...
on Jan. 15 2010 at 8:15 pm
xXWOLFXx SILVER, Brunswick, Georgia
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my friend, i can tell someone really fucked something up in your life, i know because i've personally written songs with a similar tone to it, but even though they hurt you, look what came of it, you're being complimented by complete and utter strangers :D, but in all seriousness, very well written, if i could "5 Star" it i would
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 4:10 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Thank You So Much!
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 10 2010 at 4:09 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
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Why Thank You!!!
LordOfPoetry BRONZE said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 7:28 pm
LordOfPoetry BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Erm.. I agree with jake. I dont comprehend this poem ever becoming an actual song. Their are way to many songs that are crying about bleeding and stuff. Yea i cried, i got my tissues out, but not because the song was good, but because of how much it made me die inside because of how many people voted for this.
Curator BRONZE said...
on Jan. 9 2010 at 7:18 pm
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wow....this simply is the worst song i've read to date, someone please stop the bleeding from my eyes for i can't take it anymore.
LeilaniLives PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2009 at 4:48 pm
LeilaniLives PLATINUM, Fort Wayne, Indiana
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Simple. Unnecessary for large words and deep metaphores, which is strange that I still like it. Sometimes the simplest of lyrics can mean the most. I love the repetion.