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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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Diva-Akunnaya BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 12:56 pm
This is such an amazing piece. I loved the picture and how you made things ryhme. GREAT piece:)
bkcrider92 GOLD said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 10:48 am
And please check out my work! =)
bkcrider92 GOLD said...
on Apr. 20 2010 at 10:46 am
Great Job! I know exactly how you feel because I'm in this exact situation! =(
LuckyThree said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 4:01 pm
Lovely. Nicely put.
hottie519 said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 6:48 am
that was so amazing can i get your phone number
AlexSerino said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 9:22 am
Nice guys... just have a convo. on a poem
Victoriaaa14 said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 9:18 am
well thankss nickk :P
chickadee23 SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 7:18 pm
Disgruntled- If we are 'children' so supposedly you're an adult, why are you on a TEEN site where constructive criticism is all the author wants. This isn't my fav poem, but I'm not going to bash it with harsh words. Go get a life!
chickadee23 SILVER said...
on Apr. 15 2010 at 7:14 pm
Nice Comment, NDeflip.....;)
jamrock636 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 4:42 pm
I love the rhyming! And I could really picture this moment. Great job! Feel free to check out my work too.
ashaaley said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:22 pm
hahahha♥
amanda16 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:16 pm
This poem was so good! (: I liked the rhyming.
NDeflip said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:07 pm
nice comment vicky :P
NDeflip said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:06 pm
girls shouldn't fall for tha jerks, good poem though!
Nicholas Hutchins BRONZE said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:02 pm
This poem was really great, i hope i see more made by you in the future.
ohxheyitslanzz said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:58 am
love this !! this is so true and willl happen to a girl at least once in her life
alyyyx609 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:56 am
i love this ! every girl is guaranteed to go through a situation like this
samantha13 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:53 am
this is a really good poem and i loved how you rhymed in it :)
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