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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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clairepoetry said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 10:05 am
same here haha 

on Apr. 28 2010 at 12:47 pm
Sarx96_Alas BRONZE, Springdale, Arkansas
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hail to the king, baby."

How do you tell if a guy is a jerk or not?  Are they just not respectful???   IDK?? :)

on Apr. 28 2010 at 9:36 am
princess4ever BRONZE, Tripoli, Other
1 article 23 photos 73 comments

i really like it. I love the part where u say

ur stupid jokes

u precious jerk

lol


xxxxx said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 7:04 pm
xxxxx, Taneytown, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
I cannot forgive my friends for dying: I do not find these vanishing acts of theirs at all amusing.<br /> <br /> - Logan Pearsall Smith

This is so cute, and so funny, yet so true! I absolutely adore this ballad. Keep on writing! (Do you have music to this ballad?)

on Apr. 27 2010 at 3:22 pm
Love_Hope_Faith BRONZE, Port Isabel, Texas
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
I like it.. =) its funny yet it really is true and gets the point across...

on Apr. 27 2010 at 10:17 am
effortlesslove BRONZE, Westminster, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A friend is someone who can sing the song in your heart when you have forgotten the words&quot;i

but still jerky..

on Apr. 27 2010 at 10:17 am
effortlesslove BRONZE, Westminster, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A friend is someone who can sing the song in your heart when you have forgotten the words&quot;i

the way you described him he sounds adorable. :) good job.

on Apr. 26 2010 at 6:25 pm
addicted2candy BRONZE, Little Rock, Arkansas
1 article 0 photos 15 comments
Wonderful! You captured the essence of what it means to can't get enough of that "jerk" we just love so much. Haha love.

on Apr. 26 2010 at 4:20 pm
--LoveHappens--, Fairfield, Connecticut
0 articles 0 photos 342 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;A friend is someone who knows you, but loves you anyway&quot;

I really like this it is a realtable topic as well as the flow is nice and smooth if you or anyone could please take a look at my work and leave a comment especially on The Pretty One and if time the others too then I would love that thanks so much and great job!!!

on Apr. 25 2010 at 3:31 pm
AngelBaby94 GOLD, Kingston, Tennessee
15 articles 8 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
An Eye For An Eye Will Only Make The World Blind<br /> <br /> Music was my refuge. I could crawl into the space between the notes and curl my back to loneliness.- Maya Angelou<br /> <br /> Words mean more than what is set down on paper. It takes the human voice to infuse them with deeper meaning. Maya Angelou

This Reminds Me Of My Ex. 

on Apr. 24 2010 at 11:28 am
CaitlanMcMahon, Amarillo, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect the Unexpected - I don&#039;t know, but I&#039;m not taking credit.

I can totally relate to this. You explained what I never could. Great job!! :D

on Apr. 24 2010 at 10:35 am
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
11 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is the Movement&quot; -TWLOHA<br /> &quot;Love is our weapon.&quot; -Christofer Drew<br /> &quot;I&#039;ma get me a High School Diploma, even if I gotta steal one!&quot; -ThisKidInMyMathClassLol

She's kind of teasing him, and calling him a jerk for making her love him.

kdiddy. BRONZE said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 6:09 pm
kdiddy. BRONZE, Hinton, West Virginia
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this is really good!!!!! :)

Valery5 said...
on Apr. 23 2010 at 12:15 pm
Valery5, Riverside, California
0 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's bad for your heart is good for your art."

IDK I just don't get it. Want to explain it to me??????

on Apr. 22 2010 at 11:23 pm
taylor_rae BRONZE, Beaverton, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;LET IT BE&quot; - The Beatles

this is really good i love it keep writing

on Apr. 22 2010 at 6:02 pm
BekkahsLoopy GOLD, San Jose, California
10 articles 4 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep looking forward; don&#039;t look back.&quot;<br /> &quot;To the world, you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.&quot;

you go, girl! XD

on Apr. 22 2010 at 4:20 pm
manga_maniac SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
8 articles 1 photo 79 comments
Great! really great

on Apr. 22 2010 at 4:16 pm
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
11 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is the Movement&quot; -TWLOHA<br /> &quot;Love is our weapon.&quot; -Christofer Drew<br /> &quot;I&#039;ma get me a High School Diploma, even if I gotta steal one!&quot; -ThisKidInMyMathClassLol

How do you not get it? lol

Valery5 said...
on Apr. 22 2010 at 12:32 pm
Valery5, Riverside, California
0 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What's bad for your heart is good for your art."

It rymhes but I don't get it. You like this guy that is a jerk or what?

on Apr. 22 2010 at 12:55 am
mcpanicfanic SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Ill comment on ur work if u comment on mine. lol!!!!!!