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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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Team Edward! said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 5:35 pm
i agree! great flow, it doesn't have a superficial meaning!
Adele Campbell BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 5:27 pm
I like it, I think it has great flow. Although, i don't think it has a superficial meaning.
loveyourselfalways BRONZE said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 12:27 pm
Wow, has nothing to do with Twilight but whatever. I thought this piece was actually pretty good. I like how the author described what they wanted to do. And since you're judging this piece so hard I doubt you could even write a worthy poem. So next time don't hate. Just write what you think is good. And p.s. to relate something back to Twilight, you must be really stupid. Or in love with somebody that has no clue that you exist.
Miseltoe said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 10:47 am
It's a good poem.. It might not be deep but some thngs need to be shown to people as they are. Every poem someone takes time to write is a good poem... the right audience just needs to find it... if you dont like it its probably because its not meant for you. so leave it alone.
thetiedyecrayon said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 8:13 am
Okay, first off, I have no idea how old you are and you have no idea how old I am and we both have no idea what level of writing/reading poetry we are at. But still, this was good enough to be published in the magazine. If you're crying so hard for someone writing a 'terrible poem with an abab rhyme scheme', why don't you write a good poem and post it on here for us to read?
Bonianlethalxx2 SILVER said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 2:36 am
now i think people are getting a tad crazy about this poem. ill admit its an easy poem to relate to for a lot of people but, it lacks real emotion and deepness. But i dont think the author was really trying to make this a really deep deep poem. its not the best poem ive ever seen, but its not total trash either.
ShelbeyNicole GOLD said...
on Apr. 10 2010 at 5:43 pm
I totally get this.
I was dating this guy who was... gorgeous. but then he cheated on me. Jerk! hah.
bigdreamer14 said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 10:42 am
The reason that i like this poem is because every single person in the world can relate to a "precious jerk" that they used to like.
YuhrLuvvIsMyDruq said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 11:20 pm
I ABSOLUTELY LUVV THISZ POEM I TOTALLY CAN CONNECT WIT THISZ RITE NOW.!
onthesidewalkcrying said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:30 pm
this is a awsome poem i'm going out wth this hawt dude and i think he's just like that (jerk) but what can you do about that but love it! :0 and why does everybody say good guys come last my ex wasn't
Isawyouyesterday GOLD said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 10:47 am
Who doesn't go after cocky guys? haha, good poem :)
bullet.with.butterfly.wings PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 6:59 pm
awhh boys hah...very nice paper :)
CoughingColours BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 9:01 pm
oKAY, look. How would you like to be criticized and have random people say your writing sucked? Even if it did, who are you to judge?
devin.ditto BRONZE said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 1:23 pm
ohhhh and it must be good because it got publishes in the magazine!
