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Celestial

December 28, 2010
By lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
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lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
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"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

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Summary:

Celestials and their ancient legacy have disappeared with time's passing.
Summer is one of the last remaining Celestials in the entire land of King Lance and King Slade. Once she's discovered and brought before King Slade, her Element - Fire - is taken advantage of. While Summer's being juggled between two Kingdoms, no one notices as a third Kingdom arises.
And who is the King? Not a man. It's Summer's long lost mother.
Stuck in between the Kingdoms, it's up to Summer to decide the fate of all the Kingdoms - once and for all.

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This book has 245 comments.

The_Cheese said...
on Dec. 1 2012 at 1:54 pm
The_Cheese, Dalton, Georgia
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Life is not worth living without three things, 1.Chocolate 2.Love and my personal favorite 3.Mistakes.

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I just finished reading it. Please add more chapters!!!!
The_Cheese said...
on Dec. 1 2012 at 1:01 pm
The_Cheese, Dalton, Georgia
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Life is not worth living without three things, 1.Chocolate 2.Love and my personal favorite 3.Mistakes.

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Yup, it does!!!
The_Cheese said...
on Dec. 1 2012 at 12:59 pm
The_Cheese, Dalton, Georgia
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Life is not worth living without three things, 1.Chocolate 2.Love and my personal favorite 3.Mistakes.

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The book sounds good!!!
Crunchman99 SILVER said...
on Oct. 30 2012 at 7:37 pm
Crunchman99 SILVER, Mitchell, South Dakota
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Writing can often be complex, and some people don&#039;t ever practice. The important thing is, when you get good at it, few things can help you more in life.

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I'm lovin it. No, not McDonalds, this story! I have to say, man, you've got some talent there. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Also check out Fabula Imperium, which is living in this story's gigantic shadow. I think I'm a great writer, but still this story trumps it by far. It happens to be on my somehow-incomplete-even-after-a-week profile page too.  
Vagabond SILVER said...
on Oct. 15 2012 at 4:28 am
Vagabond SILVER, New Delhi, Other
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Every end is a new beginning;<br /> What a caterpillar calls an end the rest of the world calls a butterfly;<br /> &quot;Begining are normally sacary endings are normally sad,<br /> it&#039;s in the middle which makes life worth living&quot;

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hI I REALLY ENJOYED IT... please read my new book "A new era" and give me your feedbacks! thanks!! :D
Suddenly said...
on Sep. 28 2012 at 7:34 pm
This is great! You are a wonderful writer! I cannot wait for more. 
BreakAwayFromMe said...
on Sep. 13 2012 at 9:23 am
BreakAwayFromMe, Big Island, Other
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&quot;I&#039;m scared to get close and I hate being alone.<br /> I long for that feeling to not feel at all.<br /> The higher I get, the lower I&#039;ll sink.<br /> I can&#039;t drown my demons, they know how to swim.&quot; --&quot;Can you Feel My Heart&quot; BMTH

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I absolutely love Celestial, you gonna put more in soon?
liveamongthestarsdieamongthepeople GOLD said...
on Aug. 24 2012 at 1:55 pm
liveamongthestarsdieamongthepeople GOLD, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Why I am here, I know not; where I shall go, it is useless to enquire. In the midst of myriads of the living and the dead worlds, stars, and infinity why should I be anxious of an atom?<br /> -Lord Byron

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Write more!
liveamongthestarsdieamongthepeople GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 10:49 pm
liveamongthestarsdieamongthepeople GOLD, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Why I am here, I know not; where I shall go, it is useless to enquire. In the midst of myriads of the living and the dead worlds, stars, and infinity why should I be anxious of an atom?<br /> -Lord Byron

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I really like this. Its detailed, descriptive and mysterious. Was super disappointed when it ended on page 3!
RynKep SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2012 at 12:18 pm
RynKep SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
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I really like Celestial, I'm a big fan of people who do what they love without worrying about others' opinions.
gavinbob said...
on Jun. 15 2012 at 12:14 pm
gavinbob, Springville, Utah
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&quot;You have not failed until you quit trying&quot; -Gordon B. Hinckley-

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So far I've only read the first chapter, but I'm already hooked. I love the way it starts. Intrueging and mysterious.  
lovelycheese GOLD said...
on May. 30 2012 at 6:44 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

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&quot;If you have something to do, then do it. You can&#039;t get wasted time back.&quot; ~Ben Carson.

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Hmm... I haven't thought about that. Or maybe I have, but I forgot. Haha it's been a long time! I will definitely consider continuing Celestial over the summer when school's out. Thank you ^__^
Fantasy100 BRONZE said...
on May. 30 2012 at 6:27 pm
Fantasy100 BRONZE, Bronx, New York
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Is ther going to be a sequel? I loved it
KJAngelAuthor SILVER said...
on May. 28 2012 at 3:51 pm
KJAngelAuthor SILVER, Holland, Michigan
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With understanding comes wisdom.

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I AGREE 100 PERCENT!!! It's amazing, and I WANT MORE!!! :D!!!!!
BekahBekah BRONZE said...
on May. 23 2012 at 8:52 am
BekahBekah BRONZE, Xian, Other
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I know you get lots of comments saying "OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH" and stuff, and my comment probably won't be any different.. XDD But really, I just wanted to say that I really like yoru story, and it inspired me to keep going on my own fantasy story. :DD It actually got some ideas started up in my mind.. THank you! :DD Anyways, really, keep pressing on! It's really a great story. I wouldn't be surprised if it got published and became a bestseller! :))) I mean it. 
livingparadox GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 12:23 am
livingparadox GOLD, Dhaka, Other
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You're welcome! 

Ps: You moght wanna check out my articles ! :)) xx

lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:42 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have something to do, then do it. You can&#039;t get wasted time back.&quot; ~Ben Carson.

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I'm waaay overdue for many book critique requests. I'm really sorry. I'm still not used to the workload of high school! Haha. 

However long you critique my books/articles, the same length I'll put into yours. I'm sorry, but it's only fair. I just don't do copy-and-paste self promotion, but again this is a writing website, so I will check it out whenever I can. 

lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:38 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have something to do, then do it. You can&#039;t get wasted time back.&quot; ~Ben Carson.

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Sorry for the late reply - been busy! But thanks for reading. (:
lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:38 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have something to do, then do it. You can&#039;t get wasted time back.&quot; ~Ben Carson.

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Thanks! Teen Ink is a great place for aspiring writers; hope you enjoy! (:
lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:36 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have something to do, then do it. You can&#039;t get wasted time back.&quot; ~Ben Carson.

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Thank you!