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Celestial

December 28, 2010
By lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
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lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
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"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

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Summary:

Celestials and their ancient legacy have disappeared with time's passing.
Summer is one of the last remaining Celestials in the entire land of King Lance and King Slade. Once she's discovered and brought before King Slade, her Element - Fire - is taken advantage of. While Summer's being juggled between two Kingdoms, no one notices as a third Kingdom arises.
And who is the King? Not a man. It's Summer's long lost mother.
Stuck in between the Kingdoms, it's up to Summer to decide the fate of all the Kingdoms - once and for all.

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rose98 DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 5:48 pm
rose98 DIAMOND, Ada, Oklahoma
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I love your story! You describe everything with great detail!
Roseatta BRONZE said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 1:35 pm
Roseatta BRONZE, Merritt Island, Florida
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This is the first thing I've read on here, and it's really great! I love how you capture the feeling, makes the reader feel very 'into the moment' :)
scottybear said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 5:58 pm
scottybear, Los Angeles, California
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&quot;Nothing is the end of the world...except the (actual) end of the world.&quot;<br /> Stuff happens; you need to accept that fact, and move on. If you spend too much time in worry and fear, it leaves no time for living.

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Dear lovelycheese, Hi, I liked your story very much. Would you be interesting in checking out some of my work? I have a sci-fi, teen fiction story series I'm working on. There are three episodes completed. It's called "Storm Chasers". It's under the 'recently added' tab, or you can simply click on my username: scottybear. How would you like to be an angel, given power and control over the weather?
livingparadox GOLD said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 4:03 am
livingparadox GOLD, Dhaka, Other
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The story plot is awesome! Big like! :)
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 23 2012 at 5:57 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Thank you so much! :)(:
lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 9:39 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
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Got it. I'll find time to review over the weekend. (:
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 4:31 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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well I will give you a short cut to find it, just click my user name and I think its on the second page of all my stuff that I wrote thats one my profile and click Alien Invasion Series: Book One: The Caller, or if you like thrillers better than action adventure you can read THE BEAST those are the only two novels I have wrote so far. Thank you for taking your time and checking one of my stories out! :)(:
lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 9:58 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

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Thanks for reading! If you have a novel, I'll be glad to check it out. Just tell me the title and which genre it's in (it's hard to find a single book in over a thousand). I don't have much time currently, so I'll do my best over the weekend.
Zeezee said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 7:51 am
Ummm I am 14 years old... why are you wondering bout this for?
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 15 2012 at 1:41 pm
Tongue_Blep PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
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Great job! I really liked this! I haven't read many novels, but I'm sure glad I read this! Do you think you could check out one of my novels? Thanks and keep writing! :)(:
lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 9:02 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

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Grr, characters. I'll be sure to elaborate more. Thanks for reading! (:
lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 9:00 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

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&quot;If you have something to do, then do it. You can&#039;t get wasted time back.&quot; ~Ben Carson.

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Thanks so much! But this manuscript is far from being published, yet it's still nice to hear such lovely comments. (:
james14 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 9:15 am
james14 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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how old r u?
james14 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 9:13 am
james14 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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This is really, really good!!! I think you could improve it even more though. At the beginning, you should elaborate on the characters even more! Really great! :)
ILoveWritingAlot BRONZE said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 1:16 am
ILoveWritingAlot BRONZE, E, Other
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It is such an awesome Book!! I think you should get it published! it is the best book i've read! :-)
lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 12:22 am
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have something to do, then do it. You can&#039;t get wasted time back.&quot; ~Ben Carson.

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I'll keep that in mind, thank you! (:
lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Dec. 15 2011 at 2:43 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you have something to do, then do it. You can&#039;t get wasted time back.&quot; ~Ben Carson.

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Thanks and will do! (:
Writer_Jordan GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 9:08 am
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
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All that is gold does not glitter,<br /> Not all those who wander are lost;<br /> The old that is strong does not wither,<br /> Deep roots are not reached by the frost.<br /> From the ashes a fire shall be woken,<br /> A light from the shadows shall spring;<br /> Renewed shall be blade that was broken,<br /> The crownless again shall be king.

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If you don't send it to a publisher, you should submit it in a competition! I'm sure someone will be willing to edit/publish!!
UNserieswriter said...
on Dec. 9 2011 at 6:06 pm
UNserieswriter, New York
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idk my bff jill

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your on your way to something! the cover you picked is perfect! please check out my stuff!
lovelycheese GOLD said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:20 am
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

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&quot;If you have something to do, then do it. You can&#039;t get wasted time back.&quot; ~Ben Carson.

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Haha, this book is far from even being considered by publishers! But it's a wonderful thought, and I hope someday I might reach that point. So thank you! I'm so grateful for all of you lovely Teen Inkers this Thanksgiving.