A note to my lovely readers: 

First of all, thank you guys so much for taking the time to read and comment. Whenever I get a comment and read it, good or bad I love it either way.

I wrote Celestial a while ago, when I was 12, so when I look at this, all the errors become apparent and start screaming at me. 

So recently I've picked up this book again and started re-writing it. BUT I couldn't figure out which POV to write it in. Third person [like this draft] or first person? All opinions are welcome. Thanks in advance.

Also, I've noticed a few strange ratings. I'm trying not to be nitpicky or vain, but I'm pretty dang sure the work I put into Celestial doesn't deserve 1 out of 5 stars. If you think it does, please leave a comment as to how I can improve Celestial. I'm always looking to make my stories better.

Currently I'm writing a book tentatively named Silver Lining. I've clocked around 7,000 words [I'm a agonizingly slow writer] and once I finish Chapter Four, I'll see if I can introduce it here. I know I've said that a couple of times, but high school's starting in a couple of days, and I needa get moving. :]

Another thing: If you have an article / a novel for me to read, I usually don't have time to. But when I do, I'm pretty picky and do detailed feedback. So if you want feedback on your story, it would be great if you could do a detailed critique on Celestial, too. I'd be twice as likely to read your work, then. Think of it as a swap LOL.

And again, I feel the need to express my love for you all reading this and Celestial. I'd never imagined so many people would comment, and whenever I read them over again I got the warm tingly feeling. So thank you all a million times. You guys have motivated me to continue my passion.

Thank you so much. 

Yes, I realized that, too. I had a dilemma in my head whether it was supposed to be ruby or emerald, but I guess it just came out both ways. 

No problem! I'll check it out. 

also I have two short stories that if you had the time to look at I'd be greatfull, they're called Avery Tollin and that old man, and Without any parachute, they're both related to depression, as they were for my language final last year, but I'd like some feedback on that, too since I'm new to Teenink and don't have any more than one comment on one poem and I'd think it awesome to get some feedback,

again-thanks! and keep writing, because your very good at it!

I just have to say this was amazing.

I felt like I picked that up at barnes and noble and was absolutely blown away!

one part I'm confused about is wheather the gem on her necklace is a ruby or an emerald because it was reffered to as both.

But other than that this was absolutely magnificant!

your style is great and I'm envious, and i havent finished it yet, but when I do, it would be great if you could read a novel that I'm working on, I'd be really gratefull for some feedback.

Thank you! 

Haha, I didn't realize I had all that in my story. These are just scraps of words flying around in my crazy mind, haha. :]

Thank you for the lovely feedback!

This is amazing! I've read the first three pages and I am absolutely blown away by the story. It really reads like a novel I might get at the library or a Barnes & Noble!

You've done a spectacular job giving the two main characters personality and memorable traits in such a short time so far. The premise of the whole work is intriguing and creative as well.

I can't wait for more! :)

Thanks so much! 

Ahh, I have absolutely no idea how the username lovelycheese came into my crazy mind. Oh, yeah - at first, I thought you were Lauren Oliver, the author of Delirium. 

Thanks again! I'll check it out.

I really love this book! Fantasy is the best (I mean Lord of the Rings and Harry Potter, not Twilight). Plus LovelyCheese is such a lovely name.

Soon I might have a book out in the action-adventure category (it's part of a book, it's really fantasy but that part is a-a), so check it out when it comes in (plus my other stuff!)!!!!!

Oh, no. I'm not intending for Celestial to get published, at least not now. I'm working on a newer project, where I'm piecing all the nuts and bolts together. 

Thanks for reading!