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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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robertservis GOLD said...
on May. 25 2010 at 9:06 am
this poem was simply beautiful ! idk where yer getting horrible from
ejbaby23 said...
on May. 25 2010 at 8:20 am
i like your arcticle because i love poetry
Poetryfreak016 said...
on May. 25 2010 at 7:25 am
This poem is really goood and i love the rhyme scheme. Maybe everyone needs to take a second look to find the true meaning.
Meavescrete SILVER said...
on May. 25 2010 at 7:14 am
What do you mean? This was actually good, maybe u didn't read it welll enough to understand it, but it is not horrible.
Safeleo said...
on May. 25 2010 at 1:24 am
I like your ideas and your word choice. Please post comments on my work.
Loveeyouu_x3 BRONZE said...
on May. 25 2010 at 12:05 am
:D
haha , do me a favor , call me a jerk one more time (;
Loveeyouu_x3 BRONZE said...
on May. 25 2010 at 12:04 am
um .. im confused at what you just said lol .
whatttt ?
why are you going to scream at meee ?
thewetone said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:31 pm
they call me a jerky
would you like to slap bellys said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:28 pm
this poem was horrible ....stop writing poems ...your not very goood!
Lucious super taco said...
on May. 24 2010 at 8:24 am
s is not nice cause i relate to this so much i think this is the best poem in the world and my mom said to not get mad at who wrote this but im about to scream at you.
SmileyHaley said...
on May. 22 2010 at 5:18 pm
I absoloutley love this. It's so relatable and simple, yet very creative. Great job!
Loveeyouu_x3 BRONZE said...
on May. 22 2010 at 2:54 pm
wow . SOOOOOO TRUEEEEEE !
i really love this . but i dont really relate that much cuz i dont like a jerk as of now lol .
but i used it like a few years ago .
hes still a jerk . thats all i can say .
SundanceKid SILVER said...
on May. 21 2010 at 4:00 pm
I think that you need to read between the lines.
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM said...
on May. 21 2010 at 3:59 pm
i love this it's soo good
Its.beautiful. BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2010 at 3:12 pm
No need for dishonesty. Why would someone want to be with a jerk in the 1st place. Wouldn't that defeat the purpose in being in a relationship. And let Dr.Seus be the king of rhyme. You obviously cannot do it like him.
hollyhottell DIAMOND said...
on May. 20 2010 at 4:36 pm
this is sooo good. and soo true... great job... all guys should read this... but i guess it could go to girls too .check out my work ... got tuns... lol ... loved this
savagivity777 said...
on May. 20 2010 at 11:40 am
"the things I hold so close to me"
nice ee cummings rip off. Hallmark would reject this.
nice ee cummings rip off. Hallmark would reject this.
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